tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4779286702838352700.post6091471667926196368..comments2017-06-13T17:34:47.998-07:00Comments on Kate and Biscuit's : Horse LifeMelissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17553319266378782849noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4779286702838352700.post-91836468462342205252014-09-20T05:35:40.030-07:002014-09-20T05:35:40.030-07:00This is pretty good. I would have liked you to ad...This is pretty good. I would have liked you to add some details about the house, stables, and grounds. Such as smells, colors, and other things you may have observed. Remember you must use commas in a series, and their shows possession there shows a place, like over there, as opposed to their house. I will show you how to edit, and make your corrections.Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17553319266378782849noreply@blogger.com