tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4779286702838352700.post4143020006904046688..comments2017-06-13T17:34:47.998-07:00Comments on Kate and Biscuit's : 7th Grade Geography and Writing: IranMelissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17553319266378782849noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4779286702838352700.post-28924086094097726142017-06-13T17:34:47.998-07:002017-06-13T17:34:47.998-07:00Your grade is an 81. The extra sentence in paragr...Your grade is an 81. The extra sentence in paragraph 3 earned you 5 bonus points. This was better than the original post, but I still would really love for you to add more accurate, and just plain more facts. Just because the rubric is a basic template, doesn't mean you can not put in more effort. Next year you will be required to do much longer and harder essays. Better to get it down now.Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17553319266378782849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4779286702838352700.post-76406848133439014922017-06-13T17:24:19.809-07:002017-06-13T17:24:19.809-07:00Caitlin was given the opportunity to proofread and...Caitlin was given the opportunity to proofread and edit this post. She did make a few changes, and here is her grade. Her mistakes will be discussed in person with her, by me.Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17553319266378782849noreply@blogger.com